As I slid my computer over to Cameron I told him that it is just at its starting point, and that I knew it needed a lot more work. I did this to let him know that I had not put in countless hours and that he could tell me it was awful if that is what he really thought.
When it came to reviewing his paper it was slightly more difficult since he had not started his paper. So we talked about his plans. He told me he was focusing on a fraternity. He went to the meeting on Monday and was going to get pictures this week as well. We talked about how he planned on structuring his paper, like maybe what goes on before during and after the meeting to give the reader a sense of how meeting night goes each week.
I do not think that this was really all that effected just because in our situation, I was not able to really give feed back since he had not written his paper. While he did give me some feed back it was not all that helpful, just very vague. I think that in the future I think that it would work better for me if I get feedback from more than one person, and it would be helpful if everyone actually had a rough draft to review.
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